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With you I am
everything
With you I am
somebody
With you I am
beautful
With you I am
accepted
With you I am
me

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**FORSAKEN_6URL**


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by forsakengurl

you make me all
Very nice. This is precisely how I feel about God. That is until She pisses me off not giving me what I want; the way i want it and exactly when I want it! Then the part of me that is comfortable being me around Him just lets it all out and says exactly how I feel.

Good thing He/She understands and accepts me or I'd be in a lot of trouble!

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: October 9, 2008 )





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