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I know just what youíre mother said.


Always misunderstood.




Gotta tell you something.


I saw it in your eyes.
I think I left you there,


And now itís not so good.
I fell asleep one day,


From the promises.




Thereís a lot of people,






That left their will to sleep.


I got a lot of friends. . . . . .




And theyíve got beautiful lives.......








That make my heart feel surprised.

And youíll notice it....



Itís the truth,





And thatís the truth.

Iíve made it to you,


And Iíll hide along with your fears.




Iíll face them all.
To let no one near come undone.
Iíll let the stars from sky,


watch the moonlight go by.


I've got a lot of friends. . . . . .




And theyíve got beautiful eyes.......








That make my heart feel surprised.

And youíll notice it.

I tell the truth.



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