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Senior exotic prancer
wanted to be a pole dancer
Wrapped her leg round the pole
drummer played a drum roll
Floor came up fast to meet her

------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "This one's for Lena (a limerick of sorts)"
by Nitz Kitty

Pole dancing!
Hey Kacee...love the outfit...is that a ten or a fiver hanging on your belt...what's the going rate these days!!!!

Love the image!!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

That's HOT!
As our princess Paris Hilton would say....woohoo! I particularly love the boobie tassles and the money? Hehehee! You got some chutzpah BABA BOOM lady!

Thanks NitzKitty for the tribute to chutzpah and ssssexxxxxy!

You made me smile. Hope your doing ok and feeling better these days, I try to remember what my European parents always used to say each day (they were so joyfully positive people you see) ...they would always say, "eh..it could be worse, what you got to be complain bout?"

I have no complaints.

Blessings to you and yours, Kacee!
Namaste,
Lena

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

Pole dancer
Kacee, you are a gem! Love your humor and zest for life. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning!

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

For Kacee, limericky tricky
A lady with a sense of fun so bold
Her costume is quite something to behold!
Apt always to amuse
(she has no /real/ balls to bruise)
She may be'senior', but never will be old.

Bea is right, on http://www.lit.org/view.php?viewid=43343 - there should be a sub-cat on lit.org for rhyming poetry. And maybe a sub-sub-cat for illustrated specials...?

( Posted by: mobiussoul [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

hehehehe
That is funny..thanks for the laugh Kitty...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

Kacee!
A picture of style and grace
Got up in sequins and lace
On tiptoes the girl
Did a stiletto twirl
And promptly fell flat on her face!


canít tell you how glad I am to read you again, Kacee, and how much I needed to laugh this morning. hope you are well, my friend. miss ye.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 4, 2008 )

Thank all of you for coming to my short lived debut...
I thought all of us could use a good laugh...Lena mentioned that in a pm ...I thought I'd share this with everyone...

The story behind this is... I won the G-string at a Sexy P.J. party...My friend told me I must wear it to the dance studio's Halloween Party...The girls rolled on the floor as I made my entrance doing the bump and grind..After that, I was looked to set the tone of all future parties...

As for pole and lap dancing...My hips and knees are soooo bad that I would fall flat on my face if I tried either... The old gal ain't done yet...can't do much physically ...but I can still make em laugh...

I enjoyed the limericks some of you added to the thread.. and your funny comments...glad to see everyone...still fighting the Anemia...sometimes feel like a wet dish rag...I love all you guys...and lit.org...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: October 4, 2008 )

FLOWERS FOR KACEE!
GET WELL SOON! YOU ARE SO LOVED by MANY! COME BACK SOON WITH ALL THAT JOY AND ENEGY THAT IS YOU KACEE! BEAUTIFUL SOUL;-) My prayers are with you!

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 8, 2008 )





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