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Ill learn all of your ways

One of those days
One of those days

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First you call me, here you pull me, then you send me off !
When you hold me, then you told me, how to feel your love
"Let me show you love
Kisses , rosy Stuff

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But one of those days
One of those days

No matter what you says
I will love you always

One of those days
One of those days

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Once before me, when you sold me, what you thinkin of ?
First you mold me, then you fold me, now youre being rough !
Let me see your love
What remains thereof

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But one of those days
One of those days

One dream will remain
One day youll love me again

One of those days
One of those days

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When you find me, youll remind me, with your ways of love
Youll lie beside me, with love inside me, will you turn me off ?
Love is not enough
No, love is not enough!

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But one of those days
One of those days

One of those days
Ill Learn all of your ways

One of those days
Ill learn o love your ways

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One of those days
Id love to learn your ways

One of those days
Ill learn to love you always

One of those days
Ill find out all of your ways

One of those days
One of those days

One of those days

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2008, Wael Nawara


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by waelnawara

waelnawara's " One of those days"
I once had a friend that used the expression: "Come here come here, go away go away" to describe a certain type of females that he would occasionally run into get involved with and then they would drive him nuts with that come here, go away thing...I understood exactly what he meant even though I wasn't a man nor had experienced that first hand, just as I feel I understand what was inside your head here and what you felt and are saying in this piece. It intrigued me and I felt it one of those lyrics that with the right beat will get inside ones head very easily. Good write.

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and blessings
to you & yours!


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

Bluesy
I like this bluesy bit of frustrated desire and longing. I could hear John Lee Hooker singing this, you know? Look him up if you haven't heard him.

Cool stuff, this.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

You know the type!
Yeah Lena, ... ! I mean yeah ... exactly! Come Here Come Here ... Go Away Go Away ... then Come Back Come Back ... then Buzz Off Buzz off ... they seem unable to make up their minds ...

I do have a tune and a rhythm/beat for this piece ... can't wait to record it ... even without proper track ... cuz it is one of those simple lyrics which just sings itself ...

Thanks for confirming that feeling ... and for all your nice words of encouragement ... :)

Have a lovely evening :)

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: October 4, 2008 )

John Lee Hooker
Viper, to tell you the truth I had never heard of John Lee Hooker ... so, I looked him up as you said and downloaded a few of his songs ... i liked them ... thanks for the introduction ... :)

Thanks a lot for your nice words :)

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: October 4, 2008 )





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