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Oh Mandy hair of snow and lips of candy
A peach so soft and supple

With a kiss from the south straight to my mouth
Glory be, can it be, just for me

If flannel is not your style,
through your smile I can go mile after mile

Never to touch your face, would be like a race with no finish line
In any case that would be a crime,
with the winner only getting a dime.

I hope you can find what is truly on our mind,
and always be one of a kind

I must be just me, for I give you all my trust and go for bust,
with a little lust in-between.

Has destiny intervened and put us on the same path,
or will we fade away and never play in the day

Oh Mandy you are my storm and in any form,
come to me through my dreams or reality…



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