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Night Fire
Scorches desire
Sin at level one
Any more and we’ll burn

No pretense
Excuses replaced
With expectation
Supplication

Don’t extinguish
Make it hotter
Don’t quench
Fan the flames

We’ll burst
Ignited
Rupture
Into private Inferno


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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Carnal Appetite"
by nae411

"private Inferno"
God Nae! this conflagration's got both the fire and brimstone of hell itself and the bright flame of passion intermixed! gives poem a tantalising ambiguity and allows the reader’s imagination free reign… always admired the visceral quality which allows your poems to do that, to involve the reader, to pull you head-first in to their work… nicely done here, and the quick combustion of the trip-off-the-tongue lines lent speed and urgency too… hot stuff…

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 25, 2008 )

Fanning the flames!
Nae my love...I see absence hasn't quenched your fire one bit...nor your readers!

Your poems, have a certain "dignity" about them...if I many use that word in this context...in that while lighting the fire, you never let it get out of control.

A neat feat my friend! Your fans are excstatic you have returned!

Love ya,
Bea

Love

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: September 29, 2008 )

Color me on fire!
Wow, I think you've just perfectly described how I feel when I dream of my Love with no face.

This is fantastic

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: September 29, 2008 )

Burning...
Sometimes I don't know if I am burning of lust or burning in H*** laughing... I can't decide. All I know is I have way too much energy, sexual that is. Thanks for reading! You guys made my night.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 29, 2008 )

Burn Nae, BURN hot!
Nae,

Again, I am catching up, missed so much, too much on my plate, no excuse.

Again, your work is always good in the erotica department, without exception. This is truly burning hot, reminds me of my old days hanging out with the chicks at the bar after our NOW meetings, met my old gym teacher there...

...those were my bisexual days my friend of experimentation, and because I was being so bad, it made it hotter.

Then I realized I was not so much a true bi-sexual as more heterosexual in leaning when it came to the emotional side and falling in love, men were where that happened for me.

But the physical in the opposite sex was hotter than hot and beyond sin as you say here....
...though I am not presuming, just saying more than I should as usual...
...more info than needed, but what the hell....it was HOT!

My college gym teacher by the way was but a few years older than me looked like Ellen Degeneres and had a following of women that walked all around her like puppies drooling, saw her there...
...the NOW met at the mixed disco bar, so we had our brothers gay there, and our bisexual brothers too...
...very risque, the club was called BLUE (I think) long time ago, in Monterey Bay.

I was divorced then, in-between lovers, and found 3 lovely ladies that showed me a walk on the wild side beyond compare!

So, I guess I am saying I have made this poem subjective to me and my own experiences again...
...isn't it always about ME though?

Does the sun not follow me around to keep me warm? Does the world exist when I am asleep?

Yep, you may be talking about puppies and roasting marshmallows at a family get together by the old faithful, and I have just turned it into an XXX dirty thing, sorry;-) (NOT)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 11, 2008 )

Eric, el putas in heat? hahaha!
Now, now, Eric, I like the males very much and prefer it, the ding a ling to the
other thing;-)...
... but those were long ago days that many women then and now go through, (yes, there are whole and many books written on the secret lives and thoughts of women) I was not alone in my experimentation phase, and what I have learned is that...dogs are dogs no matter the gender.

Male dogs love sniffy each others balls and asses too.

Though I must say that my days of experimentation was during my youth of my 20s as is Nae's own time, what are you now, Nae in age, maybe 30 now? Or did you just turn 21? I forget, heehee;-)


I am actually underage emotionally....about 17 perpetually...and yeah, I think Eric's poem and advice about candy from old ladies is good advice, I never was a big fan of candy, and little old ladies with candy always gave me the creeps as a little young girl;-)

Yeah, so Eric thinks a bucket of water will do the trick, but what about heterosexual heat, should copulating heterosexual couples be drenched as well when it gets to hot? or just keep their heterosexuality to themselves?

Don't ask. Don't tell?

(Ooops, I broke a rule, I told, I am bad)

But not to worry, I am a happily married heterosexually in a monogamous relationship, so I hope no one comes bursting into my house one day with a bucket of water when my husband and I are going at it...eh? Eric, I hope that never happens to you and your beautiful new wife either!

By the way, Eric, I loved your poem, you are quick study, real quick and alway leaving me smiling as I am sure you do your wife, only by other means other than poetry, though I am sure there is still some RHYTHM involved (yes, pun intended!)



( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 12, 2008 )

Lena and Eric
Lena, you are much too wise, laughing. I just turned 40 this year. I must say I am enjoying every moment of my life to the fullest now. Maybe I am just in heat? Anyway thanks for reading. Wink...

Eric what would we do without you? You certainly are a keeper.

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 13, 2008 )

My Style...
..you're my style. I can' get enough of what you write.

( Posted by: RHJesus [Member] On: July 29, 2009 )

Tori reading you
this made me think of writing TNT haikus. Haikus about Tosco, Nae and Tori.

Meows and Mwuahs, as always

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 4, 2011 )

TNT haiku ready
The first TNT haiku is ready,- inspired by your poetry,- and lighter.

http://www.lit.org/view/49664#131521

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 5, 2011 )

Inspiration
I will enjoy being your muse for the day! Enjoyed the haiku. Thank you for sharing with me.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: April 5, 2011 )

My Favorite Flame
Inhibitions melt...
When desire is the fire

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 11, 2014 )





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