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Broken stairs
abandoned castle
our hope, a roof
without rain on our heads,
one night
we're glad.





By: David E. Howerton







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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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The following comments are for "Lost road old moutains"
by bhagwandave

simple dreams
simple dreams ... often makes one glad ... not always ... but they often do ... and simple words ... go straight to the heart ...

Thank you

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: September 28, 2008 )





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