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He sends milk to needy children
but still uses coupons

He tells you what to see
on your own TV
He uses a smart chip
as old Gods never did

He builds those huge cells
for those who defer his will

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When one of them protested
:Oh My God
It is not my fault

I grew up in the gutter
I never saw my mother

I never went to school
I never learned your rules

Please dont abandon me
like my mom before Thee

Cant you mend my brain ?
Please relieve my pain

If you are but unable
by what authority label

dear God forgive my say,
will you take my life away?

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But as God got very angry indeed
he inspired the guards
to handcuff the man
and take him to the death row to feed
that big machine
on the stand

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He justly met his fate
His blasphemy decayed

Along with sinful queries
bad and dangerous
to faithful subjects
Who make the clear majority
Of the voting public

God we voted for ...

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Copyright Wael Nawara, 2008



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The following comments are for "God we Voted for"
by waelnawara

Powerful lyrics
First-class lyrics here. With you and JonnyT posting, we're being exposed to some really meaty, thought-provoking lyrics. If only we could hear them sung against some music!

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: October 1, 2008 )

Help !
Viper ... you are just too kind :)

I have tunes for all, well, with 2-3 exceptions, my Lyrics, but I need help with proper development of a sound track ... I just do not have any musical collaborators at the moment ... so, if you happen to have someone interested, I will be happy to work with them towards making proper recordings :)

But many many thanks for the encouragement ...

when I started here a few weeks ago ... I was not sure if I will ever be able to find friendly eyes & ears here ... but it seems that everyone here are really kind and encouraging ... like a real nice family workshop really ... thank you all

:)

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: October 2, 2008 )





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