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I look at your hand
a favorite finger calls for kissing
but since kissing is banned
as the love that i am missing



i read all your words
wonder when they lost their meaning
flying like wild birds
hitting my heart with that feeling



i don't wanna see
the truth
that you have gone now forever
leaving me behind
memories in my mind
a scar you carefully signed

.
.
.



i look everywhere
scanning hundreds of faces
but yours isn't there
even in your favorite places



i just wanna see
your face
touch you for just one more time
'cause you still have my soul
in its place there's a hole
a key which you just stole



all i need to do
is forget
that we have once been together
start a brand new life
find myself a wife
a job from nine to five


.
.
.

next time it would seem
i must be more careful with my heart
the bruises i redeem
must be counted from the start



i just have to be
more cunning
never put down my guards
'cause you'd never know
when one has to go
or how much pain will blow


.
.
.


a scar you carefully signed
a scar you carefully signed



(c) 2008, Wael Nawara


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The following comments are for "a scar you carefully signed"
by waelnawara

waelnawara's scar lyrics...
Ah, yes...this is the one from your site, isn't it, the one I saw and mentioned. Love song, beautiful. The longing, the pain, the desire and regret in things sings a melody loud and strong, without hesitation.

salaams
namaste
shalom
peace
and...
thank your for sharing your song!

Lena

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 30, 2008 )

Where?
OK, you saw these lyrics on my site (the SOFA?) before i published it here, right?

I am glad that you liked it ... that one came with a lot of pain to me :)

Thanks a lot Lena for your nice words :)

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: September 30, 2008 )





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