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White sand, black beach
Bleach the skin white, the light gives me a fright
I stand in the dark, not in memory of any
Despair for all, courage of many
Desolate and forbidden, given in strife
Illusions of greatness, falsities of fame...No one to blame
My Blood flows into a flood
I taste the pain of the strain, told to gain and gain
No longer a puppet for them to train
Fictitious and joyous, closest I can get
Godliness, please permit
And I will admit
To be impervious to all this shit



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