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Fingers wrapped around my thumb, skin soft and sweet
Small smiles through eyes of big love
Pieces of me laying at my feet, my blood flowing through
Wants of kisses, giggles and hugs
All your needs coming from hands of love
Teaching and taught, for better or worse
Tiny package of my soul
Endless life, picture perfect of my face
Never to be destined to history
Watching over you, to be always watched
Old and gray
Life is distant
No one to pass me on
Never realized how much I want
A child of mine

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