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Bread for all

The plausibility of the beginning, grasped for turmoil and mayhem
Bombarded by profane melancholy for the dismissal of tranquility
Instinctively buoyant and mesmerized by the unknown
Attributes of being invisible, immersed in my blood
Abandoned and quenched from self-loathing
Rejoicing only to deaf ears and closed eyes
Transcendent to the cultivated culture
Invincible to anguish and dignity
Subversive to the human race
Nimbly sure of the civility
To mourn the infused
Grieve mockeries

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