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cosmetic compilations
paintings under art
barely disguised
masking by shade
Victoria's illuminated secret

light and angle manipulated
reforming perception
with mind's lense
colour of desire returns
fulfillment through NOKIA illusion

reference: "Victoria's secret" and "tricked"

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "unsublimation"
by Bobby7L

Got your comment and thought, "Shit? Bobby7L's back, too?" Fantastic! People seem to be trickling back over the last couple of weeks and, man, I couldn't be happier. Hope we see more of you!

There are always multiple meanings in your poems. I read this one a few times, teased out a few possibilities. I'm actually quite fond of the bare, surface meaning of this oen - -our willingness to be consumed by, taken by, artifice. But perhaps that's also the deeper meaning, eh? That this willingness extends far beyond Victoria's Secret, seeps into every aspect of our lives.

As a devilish philosopher once said, "Every man, wherever he goes, is encompassed by a cloud of comforting convictions, which move with him like flies on a summer day".

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 16, 2008 )

Never realized how much I devour your poetry and other writings until this just hit me smack across the face,,,just now.

Such a masterpiece in its own, you ....Bobby, are really great to READ again. SO glad someone called me back here......or something.

I am with Viper here!!!!!!!!!!!!

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 16, 2008 )


I never left. I do submit over at LM, but Lit has always held corner of heart...

"What we believe is based upon our perceptions." -Zukav


Your taking time to read and comment is greatly appreciated.


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 17, 2008 )

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