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Upon a rippled surface
Falls a calming dance.
With arched rainbows
Through cascading mist,
Reflected in glazed eyes
Of vagrants, pissed.
Polished fish spew
Silver shafts of crystal beads.
Their rhythm calm,
Yet fall chaotic.
Sparkle – Splash.
To reaching hands


Requesting cash.
An endless motion
Of tranquil trance,
Contained in water
From the fountain.
For these wise men,
Life’s a mountain.


Howard – 08 February 2001



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