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"Auld acquaintance"-
an awkward arrangement
of people- and letters,
begins anew(?)


"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson

"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins

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The following comments are for "Neighbor"
by drsoos

odd acquaintance

odd? moi? never let it be said...

y' know, your poem made me think that it's only us who have the power to make things anew, that or we can drag the same old shit to another venue and ascribe the same sad roles to ourselves and others... but don't worry about that, that's just the therapy talking ;)… fecking stuff, rots the brain worse than the beer, I swear to God…

I like the “awkward”, the “awkward rings true, but then, nothing ventured, nothing gained… nothing broken hurtling down the side of a gaping crevasse either, but I digress…

hey, I miss the yaminals…

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 26, 2008 )

Welcome home...
Blessings....this was OK, I know you can do better, but for a quickie, it satisfied well enough. Looking forward to reading more from you wheneve I am able.

Blessings...and Namaste~

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 27, 2008 )

odd acquaint
Auld Misery- yaminals are not forgotten, but I've got some self-education ongoing re novel length or even series type stuff. The big pic befuddles. I've an even bigger idea- I just need plots, characters, etc. Theme,schmeme- I'm talking meme.

Thanks for your comments.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: August 28, 2008 )

Karma quikiesatisfi
Not bad is not bad. I felt it fit as tenants in a tenament. Thanks for your comment.


( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: August 28, 2008 )

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