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Oh my precious one
she comes from above
below the unknown
thy goddess of love
how you've brought me upon
this majestic song
when heavens come undone
I offer you more than hand
where sounds of sea meet land
ashore I stand alone
and look upon your beauty
settling as light would hover
awake with you, from moment of dawn
my quest to be your pawn
till dusk I submit as your lover
and through the darkness of night
shall we ignite the skies
with stars of awe and wonder
taketh my tears upon your breast
secure this passion that lies
inside thy pounding chest
'fore it shatters the silence of reason
and voices an outrage of treason
I want only to be with you
through infinite seasons anew
adjoin with me again
by mind and flesh
I ask one more time
allow our hearts to mesh
so as forever they shall spin
together again unto the end, for
I need you so ever now
pleading before you
I take a bow.

Laszlo Vaszily aka S.K.L.

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The following comments are for "Discontentment"
by LaszloVaszily

Very ethereal, and of course, the gods/goddesses concepts in poetry always interest me.

Lena aka Karma

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 28, 2008 )

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