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My shadow called.

I listened.

In his voice, manic excitement...maybe more.

I became afraid.

Many paths I have trod.

Many souls I have raped.

I wanted to tell him of my love.

I didn't.

I wanted to hold him in my arms.

I couldn't.

Many paths I have trod.

Many souls I have raped.

He doesn't have to bleed like I bled.

Only so much we have and no more.

He shouldn't have to die like I am.

Its not too late.

Many paths I have trod.

many souls I have raped.

I want to tell him:

"dreams are sublime, but hope is better."

I know it sounds 'ubik'itious my brother,

but please hear me, I love you.

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