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For every time you speak
Only within can a woman feel so unique
Each time you look into her eyes
She can't help, but have joyful, happy tears
For love, has become more to her than just a heart

When your hands are clenching among her hands
The passion of love can be deeper than the bottom of the sand
She can't wait for those words, she loves to hear
Hunger for that touch, that she needs and wants to feel
For love, has become more to her than just a heart

For every time you say,"I Love You"
She will always remember those special words, "I Do"
For love, has become more to her, than just a heart.

------
Jennifer R. K



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The following comments are for "More Than Just A Heart"
by Carmel Brown66

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this is more of a poem than opinion,no?
and it is a very good poem at that.

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 12, 2003 )





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