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It was an easy uphill climb.
Everest looked inquisitive.
I wrapped wisps of fog
into green butterflies for the ship that broke my window with its algorithm.

I left my pillow and squeezed red earth, which smelt like my gigantic appetite
at the hostel hours of dawn.

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The following comments are for "Dream"
by difficulty

Poem has feelings of a down to earth emotion of nature. It gets intense.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: August 16, 2008 )

Thanks Poewhit.

( Posted by: difficulty [Member] On: August 18, 2008 )

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