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I feel trapped in myself,
Trapped by expectations,
By obligations.
I feel as if I've been blindsided
In the dead end of life.
People pummel me from all angles.
My constant star is just that: constant
And temptation follows me at every turn.
I'm torn.
Lying on the floor naked and unaware,
Lost in confusion.
My lust or my love?
Who'll help me decide?
Either way I feel trapped.
Without both, I'm lost
And with both, I'm with neither.
How can I decide
Except by putting my heart aside?

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