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You are the devil on my shoulder.
Every time I see your face,
I'm led toward temptation.
Whenever you are near,
I am lost in myself,
Drinking in the grace of your form.
Without you, I feel empty, soulless,
Unsheltered in a cruel world
With only myself, a wretched half.
But with you, I become whole.
Drag me sinfully down into the mire with you.

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