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OCEANS 666
by kilgoretrout (Member) - published: August 6, 2008
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Ive seen too much for one god to believe...

This particular god is feeling squoozed real tight in this skinful prison thing right about now...

I still have rational thoughts depite what my mailman says...but I really think the Atlantic Ocean is evil...

How else to explain the need to masterbate as soon as I stepped off the plane...

Im no theologian but if Pacific means peaceful...Atlantic must mean unpeaceful...

Im off to India in a few...

First though Im gonna get a t-shirt made that says Fuck the Atlantic Ocean...

No confusion about that...Ommmmmmmmmm...

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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by kilgoretrout

oceans of evil
it's not very often I find myself at a loss for words, but this had me stumped for a while...

will hopefully be making an ocean crossing of my own, end of August, then I can test your theory... although, I have a feeling, it's probably just you... maybe that means you're a paranoid fantasist, or maybe that means your a centre of a giant conspiracy... I mean, seen as how all water is connected, you're never really safe from it's malign influence... even the human body's mostly water... no, I feel you'll never be free of it... sorry...

poem reminds me what I miss about you... I miss you're unapologetic and excessive and gloriously inappropriate way with words and self... don't be a stranger.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 6, 2008 )

Vorpal leads me here to and what do I find?
In my last post "Genocide in China Today" I said I was on medical leave break from the Lit.Org, but I must check my email each day no matter, and there is Vorpal again luring me in "just when I thought I was out" (like Pacino's quote in the Godfather movie)...anyway, finding a Vorpal notice that someone new had commented on my post, I could not stop there, I had to see what else was in the works here on the Lit.Org, and what do I find, but YOU! Terence, I have missed you in the same way that Shannon has...and I delighted to find this post by you. Are you really going to India? Are you going to be around when Shannon comes to the US? We we all be able to perhaps meet somewhere in person? That would be cool. Anyway, I am not in the best of moods, but just wanted to let you know I was here, read, commented and left. Now I am going back to my email, no, no, first I am going to see if Shannon has something new too, what am I saying? Of course he does, he always does. Hope to meet you one day, and many blessings and good-luck to you on your path journeys.

Namaste!

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 6, 2008 )

getting on and getting off
Third and last poem I commenting on tonight. How can I ignore a Burns original?

Think the real evil in question is a certain YMCA scout master who runs away to foreign countries with a group of underaged boys. Hope anyone reading this knows this is how we interact. WE DON'T TAKE OURSELVES SERIOUSLY AND IT SHOWS.

Did you have a mouth full of peanuts when you got the urge to merge with rosey palm?

Seriously, this poem is vintage Burns. Has all the cynical wit one has come to expect from that brilliant brain you are drowning with devil's piss.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: August 7, 2008 )

Terence & the evil ocean
Yep.
Look what it f****n' did to the Titanic!
Only you can make poetry out of opinion. I love this. It is wide open and uncluttered with edit.
Ommmmmmmmmmmm.
(aka as thank you)
Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: August 9, 2008 )





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