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Fury brands my soul
Races through my veins,
The fire has been reawakened.
Those who must be perfect
Will burn in it's wake.
I am not more flawed
Than anyone else.
They just bury it deeper
So they can pretend that they're better.

I am no different than anyone else.
Blood pumps through my veins,
Air flows in my chest.
It's only the spark that sets me apart.
I dare the person who is better than me
To step forward.

That person is the liar.

I am accountable, but they forget
That so are they.
Push me just one more step,
And all will be brought low.
No one who persecutes me
Will remain unscathed.


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The following comments are for "The Reckoning"
by serenastargazr

Wow!!
Some powerful words there...No one should be made to feel less equal than anyone else...I was there too...once...I leave the vengeance up to God as I sit and watch evil come crashing down upon their heads...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 8, 2008 )





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