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Small room with 12 bathrooms.


DEALS, DEALS, DEALS
Envelopes fill the baskets.
Mirrors with lipstick kisses.
In the small room-elbows bump.
Into the office.
OCCUPIED - next bathroom.


Outside neighbors look.
Cesspool trucks arrive.
Dirt cover-up off lid.
Man preys lid open. Next years news escapes.
CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLATICS AGAIN.

[ search: POEWHIT ]

JESUS SAVES

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "AMERICA POLITICO"
by poewhit

Sorry
Sorry - I don't really get it.
My problem; I suppose.
My only suggestion is that you take the time to check your spelling before you submit.
(That's always bugged me . . . not shore wyy)

( Posted by: cjmiller [Member] On: August 6, 2008 )





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