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It wasn't a war,
just where we were.

Was still seeking reason
as it hit him.
He won't hunt rabbit again.

Was watching them
preparing to look at me,
when they stopped seeing.

It's not about why anymore,
just that which is.

..feeling it near


4.30.08
Edited version:
8.04.08
CryptoKnight Chronicles

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ghost voiceprints




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