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Eve you took that apple, you taste
and gave us something
better than
any man ever could.

Eve you took that apple, you taste
and you bit the heart
taught us better
than any God ever could.

someday could be today...

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by ruina

all about Eve

read this as a paean to self-discovery and empowerment, as a re-writing and re-casting of the old phallocentric Christian myth that has Eve held responsible for “fall”, and instead restoring her to centre of feminist, [perhaps lesbian?] myth, as teacher and liberator…

well expressed, these themes, coherently and succinctly. Man and God both identified as orthodoxies any woman could do without… speaking from own experience some men would be better off without too…

so glad your posting here regularly again. best to ye.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 5, 2008 )

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