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The crest of mountains
Are like sleepy cottonwoods
Baths in the rays of
The Cherokee sun

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The following comments are for "The Cherokee Sun"
by FireFly747

Taking pictures....
An interesting poetic snapshot!

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: August 5, 2008 )

Wanting More or Less
After a read or two (or three)
Felt as though this could be part of a larger poem (in other words - expand upon it) at the same time I was reading it as Haiku on steroids.
Just my two cents.
Good stuff.
- C

( Posted by: cjmiller [Member] On: August 6, 2008 )

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