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Where are the shadows at night?
What makes you cry at night?
Is it just the pale moonlight,
or the feeling that you just might?
You listen to all thatís said.
Words talk inside your head.
There is something you just dread.
Is it the feeling that maybe your dead?
You just let your life go on.
You wonder, wonder about your son.
Leaving things left undone.
The feeling that youíve never won.
When will it start to shine?
When will a life be mine?
Living life on lies and wine,
a feeling that youíre doing fine.
Look at the world, itís blue.
You know what is true.
Question all the things you do.
Feeling maybe there not for you.
Follow your hearts desire,
step over, beyond the wire.
It is like a burning fire
and the feeling of angels choir.
What makes your eyes shine bright?
What makes you dance at night?
Is it just the pale moonlight,
or the feeling, you just might?

Howard Ė 14 January 2001



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The following comments are for "YOU JUST MIGHT"
by HdotOdotWARD

Moonlight Dance
Very arresting-especially the last four lines. For a moment there I thought I was dancing under moonlight.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 2, 2008 )





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