Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

Look at the time itís getting late.
Staying out of bed to wait
To listen to the usual excuses.
I sometimes wonder what the use is!
Oh, Iíve heard it all before
And the creeping through the door.
I bet thereís someone else involved.
Iíll get this little lot resolved.
Another row, I feel it brewing.
But wait, what have I been doing?

Howard 01 Dec 02



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Home Late"
by HdotOdotWARD

A Good Laugh
I got a kick out of this one. Keep writing here at Lit!

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 2, 2008 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: