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you play so hard
flippin that board this way
and that
keepin all attention away from your heart
your head your mind
your pretty face
two females kissin thats what he said,
you fool.

you push this one away?
fuck you
freak in love with your ego your image your play
your instant gratification dance
walking mean your only power
it dies daily
your daily chosen way
leave me heartache again
nothing real
no pride just keep running
they like it you know it
keep running inside
you show it with arrogant pride.

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The following comments are for "Skaters Who Are Haters"
by satori

skater hater hater
i actually find skating to be a great way of retaining focus in life; almost therapuetic (been a 'skater' for many years). yeah, it's an escape, but i wouldn't say a negative one; life can't be all serious, you know? i realise this is probably directed at a specific 'skater', but to many of us there is more to it than just image; maybe there's more to it for this individual as well.

( Posted by: ghostpoisonsturgeon [Member] On: August 4, 2008 )

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