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My silent, shaken voice still rings
of endless offers and hopeless dreams.
Though our distance is growing,
I take confront in knowing
You are better off without me.

Still silent voice, still kept unheard
scared only, by that negative word.
I still call our dead connection
Just to feel our lost affection.
You are better off without me.

I hope that history repeats itself,
Sometimes I find I've lied right to myself.
In any case I fear time is running out,
In my silent voice, I begin to shout.
But, You are still better off without me.

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The most fantasical truth of all: There is no meaning to any of this.


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