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Why is it?
When life hangs in the balance,
and the chips are down.
Tell me why?
When the situation's dire,
that i can never find,
A working ballpoint pen

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if the pen is mighter then the sword then the word processer must be mighter then the missile


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The following comments are for "the need of a pen"
by johntellall

Such is my life too
It is a brief snapshot of a poem; but I think it can also be a metaphor for all those "If I only had a.." moments that frustrate and confound us.

I can never find my car keys...
I can never get the cap off...
I can never pull the trigger...

yeah, I am a big fan of short poems that say one thing really well, as this does.

thanks

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: July 30, 2008 )





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