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theres so much more to cry becuase you see ive broken rules
drinking like a matrye who has overcome his fear of wine
stinking filthy hopeless dirty poor disgraced no dignity
maybe lonely overwhelming sorry i have fallen down

hide me

baby footed like a tip toe i have walked the extra mile
broken shatters of the bottles smelling like an open wound
cut my fingers from removal i am so fucking brown
smell like thunder in the morning just before Ive woken up

i have to drive all night just to find my way home again
i have to drive all night just to make it through on my own

take noteworthy from this moment we are so very close
nothing matters if youre carefull from the end of destiny
when the fires start to rumble leave the house immediately
dont be laughing ,roofs come tumbling leaving you alone with me

i have to drive all night just to find my way home again
i have to drive all night just to make it through on my own








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