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Her life has come loose
like a sweater, wrongly washed
Hangs shapeless on her.

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The following comments are for "Haiku Bereavement"
by MobiusSoul

I can identify both with sweaters washed wrongly and with life out of shape. You say much with little.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: July 25, 2008 )

as, Drsoos,
... do you. The as-things-areness of a haiku; recognition of same; brief satisfaction of uncertain poet.

Cheers. May all your sweaters hug the curves. (And all your curves, hug other peoples' sweaters?)

( Posted by: mobiussoul [Member] On: July 25, 2008 )

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