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Looking in your eyes I see you care
Being in your arms Is what I want
I see tomorrow and forever in a day.
You look at me and I smile
I get quiet and it makes you wonder.

Spending time together sets me free.
I feel my heart opening and I get scared.
Can I trust you with my heart?
Or should I hide?
The touch of your hand all over my body
The gentleness of your touch makes me
Want to hold you closer than ever.

I feel your breath on my neck and I feel
Light as a feather.
The feel of your lips on mine
I lay beside you and im not alone
The warmth of your body against mine
Can this be what I have been searching for.

I look into the sky, I see the moon and in my
Thoughts I see you clearly
Can these feelins from my heart be real?
My hope is one day they will be for now
I hold onto the truth that hope will get us thru
And what we have together will one day turn into
Something very good.



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