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by R.K.Singh (Member) - published: July 20, 2008
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Category - Haiku
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She lends her canvas
with emotions on palate:
cries of orchestra

--R.K.SINGH

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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

canvas....
R.K.Singh, I do believe you sent me an email, but somehow it was lost in my deletion by accident...and I did not get a chance to read it, so please resend. By the way, I like this new haiku, very cool and it felt very subjective to my own experience. Thanks for sharing. Blessings and namaste.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: July 23, 2008 )

cries and whispers...
...good haiku, I think, may do either or both, but must be somehow audible. This one sounds to me like something for solo piano: much use of the soft and sustaining pedals, notes mostly green and aquamarine. I picture an impressionist scene, played out between painter and sitter. Lots of ambiguous skin and ambiguous emotion.

Possibly it is too late and I am either insufficiently drunk or insufficiently sober. In short, however, this is a good poem.

( Posted by: mobiussoul [Member] On: July 25, 2008 )

haiku
Thanks mobiussoul for stopping by this haiku and commenting on it. Your comment is quite sober.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 31, 2008 )

Body
Thanks Lena for your comments. I have already sent you another mail. Please respond.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 31, 2008 )





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