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The Day has Come

I never thought the day would come, and yet it's finally here

I ran away trying to hide the tear

They always told me you would betray

They told me I shouldn't stay

And yet I stayed your friend despite the warning

Then there was that one morning

I found you laughing at me behind my back

You were with my best friend but that's beside the fact

You betrayed me with out a second thought

Now I'll show you what it has bought:

This is my last will

I hope you like what I left

Because it's all I have

But I guess it's a secret that should've been better kept

For that was the reason you were laughing

But you fail to realize the wonderful time I'm having now

You can tell me later 'How...'

How could you be so cruel as to not think of other's feelings

The feelings that you are playing with and dealing

I'm here to say good bye because I'm cutting my time short

And Meaghan I hope you have fun playing with people's hearts

~Fin~

My first poem. I was really mad when I wrote this. Leave reviews if you'd like!



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by chibi-chan

wow
Your poem shows the way I feel about me and my friend Tammy, we used to be the best of friends and now she's nothing but a backstabber...very nicely written

( Posted by: Alexandra [Member] On: August 15, 2001 )





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