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SUTAPA CHAUDHURI

just for a day
we’d face the sun
just for a day
we’d dare
just for a day
we’d make believe
just for a day
we’d dream
just for a day
we’d unite
just for a day
we’d love
just for a day
we’d live
just for a day
we’d be free.

just for a day
you’d be mine!
together
playing house
fulfill
our desires!



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