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2/11/2008
Sitting as I watch
The silent scene fly by
Knowing if I stop
It’ll be harder to say goodbye
Goodbye to friends
I loved and knew
Goodbye to things
I had as I grew
Goodbye to everything
I ever had
Goodbye’s a word
That makes us sad
So say hello
To new good times
Say hello to
Brand new rhymes
Make each day
Better than you
And make sure you have
Light to follow you through.



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