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What A Lovely Little Box Has She
by TAMMYHENDRIX (Member) - published: July 10, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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**ADULT CONTENT**
UPDATED VERSION AUTHORED BY
tammyhendrix & frtoscano

What A Lovely Little Box Has She



What a lovely little box
has she.
Contents proud and bold,
exciting to see.

Intriguing and numerous,
of all shapes and sizes.
The smirk on her face tells me
she really does like it.

Some black.
Some white.
And some a little blue.
She even has one that swirls
Round too.

Wiggling to and fro,
Up and down,
Back and forth:

Naughty little thoughts give way
As she pulls out the flowers and
Puts them in a vase.



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The following comments are for "What A Lovely Little Box Has She"
by TAMMYHENDRIX

I'm an eejit...
you know, I didn't get this the first time around... now, that's either 'cause I'm one of the last great Holy Innocents, or- and this is more likely- I'm an eejit...

you do make me smile, though, Tammy. love to read your playful pieces, as well as your darker works... missed reading ye.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )

how about this?
What a lovely little box
has she.
Contents proud and bold,
exciting to see.

Intriguing and numerous,
of all shapes and sizes.
The smirk on her face tells me
she really does like it.

Some black.
Some white.
And some a little blue.
She even has one that swirls
Round too.

Wiggling to and fro,
Up and down,
Back and forth:

Naughty little thoughts give way as
She pulls out the flowers and
Puts them in a vase.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )

Des
Yea! I like it. So....maybe I'll change it.

Aside from that...did you get it? Was it funny?
Or should I just delete

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )

back and forth
Yes, I liked it. Very tongue in cheek. The little twist at the end reminded me of your boyfriend's mosquito poem.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )

Pandora's Box
This is a real rib tickler.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: July 14, 2008 )





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