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out of a dream (part two)
by Bobby7L (Member) - published: July 6, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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with candlelit chorus in refrain
where and when constant
her replies are carried in faint recital
by a summer night's breeze

then it's now
there's reason for this dream
or maybe
i'm just not quite awake


07.05/07.06.08
ghost voiceprints

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ghost voiceprints




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by Bobby7L

not quite awake
I like those moments between sleeping and waking, where those tantalizing, teasing, hints of dreams lie… poem distils that sensation well… like hoe it possibly persists in to waking… haunting…

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )

Shannon..not quite awake
Shannon-
Thanks for taking time here...

B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: July 10, 2008 )





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