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The night breaths cold air
I feel your hungry stare
I bring thee sweet bread
Night, lift up your vale
Show this world a brighter day
Life is a drama
This world is a stage
Night is your curtain
Night be thy window shade



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The following comments are for "Night Be Thy Window Shade"
by FireFly747

Darkest Hour
Maybe for the Aussies at this time of year...

Here in North America its hot and light for 18 hours a day just now..

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 3, 2008 )





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