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They found you a spot
Beneath
Pensive perennials

The coffin will carry us
There
When the time comes

Behind houses and
The taller trees, wet
With the warm rheum of daybreak,
Dripping.

There are no apologies
Where you have gone

The dead make more of their mouths
Than that

I have believed this
Since I was a child,
Still do despite my
Best
Efforts.

Later there will be toasting,
But it won’t ring true
Because

Most of the people who knew you
Have been dead ten years
Already

It will be like wishing a stranger luck
Not insincere,
Just meaningless.

Can’t say I ever liked you
But sometimes you were kind
And I always hoped you’d be happier

That much
At least
Is true.


------
The human race, the only race I know where everybody loses.


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The following comments are for "pall bearing"
by AuldMiseryGuts

Well Done
Hi

Think I will do the toasting first... Well Done if you please.... Headstones and Burials cost so much money dont they.

Not too sure where to scatter the ashes... Maybe in a local resevoir.. then everyone can "Have A Drink on Me" unlike the scam of pretending red wine is blood

Creating a burial plot is like saying …”Here I am Everyone…Next to my Wife/Hubby/Partners, now do feel guilty and get up off your lazy ass visit me bring me flowers trim the grass”

See I have sort of queered the pitch…. 3 Wives already I would need a harem not a grave….

I spent a good deal of time searching a graveyard in Gorton Manchester looking for my gran and granddads grave… As you say the people that would visit were long dead…. No directions as such. On my third trip I found it, some one had stolen the Angel figure mounted on the engraved granite base. Hence why I didn’t spot it on earlier visits. I took the regulation photos to share with brothers and sisters… I somehow seem to have gained more leisure time to go on these mad adventures…

Never worry about death… death is your friend… doesn’t matter how educated you think you are you won’t have the slightest clue what happens when you are dead… and that old body you have nurtured…who gives a toss...

So yes join with me for a toast to the dead...Life is for the Living...and The Living Dead are for Dying.

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: June 30, 2008 )

In Passing
I had just recently went to a funeral of a lost friend. (At my age it happens more and more.) The discomfort of those left behind was thick and difficult. Nothing said was true and that saddened me. But true to the nature of this person the sky roared and it let go drenching everyone in attendance. For me I was at peace and where ever he was his mouth was made for grinning. When I leave I want people to stand around have a drink and tell as many magnificent lies about me as I have told in my life.
Nice piece.
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 1, 2008 )

Snow Storm
That Comment made me laugh

When I burried my wife a sudden snow storm started as we carried Janet into the church..

It had been sunny, our garden was bathed in sunshine the big front lawn was covered in wreathes and flowers waiting for the Hearse from the Funeral Parlour...Even the 15 minute journey to the Church at Kirkland was fine.

After the service we Carried Janet out to her grave The Sun shone as the Piper Played.. snow still covered the ground.....

Not sure if Janet just wanted to leave with a big show of power...Or wanted Hell to Freeze Over before we lowered her into the final resting place.....

OMG (Thats either "Old Misery Guts" ... or "Oh My God") whichever.... That Blast from The Past has made me smile.

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 1, 2008 )

Yep!
I wonder if those that pass are just amazed at what they find out that we living don't know. What if it is all so simple and laughable?
We fret so much about our lives - I guess there is something else to be concerned with after we die. Who knows? I like the poem - I like Eric's story. After we run this race I hope there is some peace and some understanding.
Ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 2, 2008 )

One Pall-Bearer
From my experience, being the one left behind when a friend or family member dies feels like being the only pall-bearer, carrying the sarcophagus alone. It's more painful than any other kind of hurting I've had to deal with.

I enjoyed your poem...very deep and imaginative.

-Aubri

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: July 3, 2008 )

seems
I'm full of funeral stuff lately, and I'm not the only one either, maybe it's something in the water. course, some would have it that I'm full of something else lately, too. but we won't go in to that ;)

Eric, I’m a strange sort of person, I still feel like I need a graveside to stand beside… I suppose it’s helpful in so far as it gives a proper time and place for the snotty histrionics symptomatic of mourning… now if I could just confine said hysterical snotting to allotted area, how much easier and happier life would be…

a lot of the time grave going is penance, I think, for not doing enough when alive… bugger all use to those below, but maybe it appeases conscience… still think funerals are more for the living than the dead… and I think I shall write my own eulogy…

jp, I agree totally, about the awkwardness of it all. this funeral was for friend of family, there were so few left who actually “knew” her that everything said rang false, and the woman we’d known as kids bore no resemblance to the shrunken old lady in the coffin… like I said, think I’ll write my own eulogy, ‘cause no one tells better lies about me than me, frankly… thanks for commenting…

Aubri, rare to receive a comment from you. glad to see you, but sad that it’s this piece you identify with. have lost people I care about deeply and people I despised as deeply, and people I felt neither anger or true affection for, save for the wish they’d had a better life and a better end… my only advice to you would be don’t let your losing somebody define your life, celebrate what they were, don’t obsess that they’re gone… thanks for commenting. best to ye.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: July 11, 2008 )





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