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My body hurts
The tongue feels like
Falling out of my mouth
Perpetual puking
From soul buried alive

In moments I forget
To breathe then body
Wakes in relief
Endless need to speak

The feeling of hate
Is waking me still
Forcing out denial
Pain now seeing
Truth for truth


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