epitaphialyzed
by Bobby7L (Member) - published: June 28, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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without wings
march airfield arrived
flying free

06.25.08
Linguistic Forensics: Fingerprints of a poet-ghost

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When I was a man I was a rabbit. - Story told to neighbor, when 5.

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The following comments are for "epitaphialyzed"
by Bobby7L

Bobby & epitaph
First of all, I applaud your quote. I, too, think we all have something original to say. I've put signatures that are my own as well.

As for this 3/5/3, I have no idea what to attach it to, but then, that means I also have no idea what to detach it from...It flies free, no doubt! But it's an epitaph, so it must signify someone or something...I don't know what. Apologies for my limited intellect, once again.

I have trouble, in English, with "free": somehow, free means gratis, and it is "freed" that means having acquired freedom.

The image of an airfield arriving is surreal, but maybe something happened in the news about a landing on some "celestial body" that I missed? I adore the airfield arriving, Bobby, it's such a tidy visualization.

Thank you!

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 29, 2008 )

windchime: of arriving without wings
Lucie-
Born on March Air Force Base, 50m SE of L.A.

..a premortem penning...perhaps (smiling)

Per usual, your take/transliteration is appreciated.

Ciao,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 29, 2008 )

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