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SLEEPLESS BIRDS
by R.K.Singh (Member) - published: June 28, 2008
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Category - Haiku
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Leisurely
the birds keep talking
beyond midnight
hot humid summer
keeps me sleepless too

--R.K.SINGH


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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

birds keep talking
Lucid read.

Just returned from, what I term, my nightly diabetic walk and I have birdsongs in my head. Seems a family of birds has taken over neighbor's cluster of palm trees and their songs are beautiful.

And I come home to this. Beautiful.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: July 2, 2008 )

nightmare


Ahh

Those earlier birds were just a dream...strange I must have been drunk thats twice I have been reminded of birds..

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 3, 2008 )

Sleeplessness
Thanks Eric and desvelado for your comments on the tanka.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 7, 2008 )





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