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Turn the corner
Another dead end
Turn around
Begin again

Spinning in circles
Where am I going
Which way's up
Which way's down

The nerves all set in
The trembling begins
Fearing the monster
My own natural disaster.

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The following comments are for "4/17/2008"
by LostInTheCrowd

lost crowd...
gives creeps, been there...personally reminds of good toke smoke...matters not, I feel you.

( Posted by: ravenblack [Member] On: July 1, 2008 )

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