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Prophecy
by colinbaker62 (Member) - published: June 25, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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The property-
less; history's
concrete Christ,
collectively hanged upon the cross
of self-expansion. And like Christ,
they too, will one day be
greater than their oppressors.





Colin Baker June 08

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Colin


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by colinbaker62

concrete Christ
No one is really without property, are they? We all have our thoughts to hold dear and no one will ever separate us from them. They are my most valued possesion.

Your poem made me think of early (white) Americans who claimed heading west was manifest destiny. Never once mentioned greed as their motives.

Wow, Colin, you've been busy lately. Think I need to sip from your well 'cos I haven't written a single line in days.





( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: June 26, 2008 )

Thanks
Thanks 'FR'..

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: June 26, 2008 )

Prophecy
I see God's people coming collectively together ...Bring back God's children...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: June 26, 2008 )

A rallying call!
Thanks Kacee..That sounds like a rallying call! ...lol




Colin

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: June 27, 2008 )

overcome
Nice job! The nature of enlightenment is that either you are very lonely or hunted down and killed. Whenever God decides we are doing it the wrong way he picks someone to know and tell the truth. I will always pray but really wonder if I want God to talk to me. Most prophets are reluctant and for good reason.
ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 2, 2008 )

Thanks Ken
Thanks Ken. And the perspective you bring to the poem is most interesting.




Colin

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: July 2, 2008 )





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