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Peeking through the window of the past,
only to see the most lonely despair.

Suffering from the games that she played,
especially the times that she didn't care.

Troubling to see the past,
all because of the fact,
that I wasn't really aware.

Oh, the thing we called love,
didn't seem to be as strong as we thought,
maybe because,
it really wasn't there.



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by BobT

Needful Writes 101
"Needful Writes 101" now available at Amazon.com.
Compilation book of 101 poems by Robert Trafton,

This book contains insight to love, hurt, depression, and some inspiration through a time
unknowingness and confusion.

( Posted by: BobT [Member] On: June 24, 2008 )





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