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I thought i had reached the last room walking through endless doors,
i believed i had seen the last painting of me passing thorugh endless corridors,
looking through the window in the next room the boundaries are getting fainter,
i am being erased by the giant one eyed painter.



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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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